On Friday, my family and I celebrated the 4th of July. We went swimming and came back home to make food. After that, we saw white fireworks in the beautiful night sky. We made a campfire and just stared at the lively flame. Then, we started to make s’mores. Tommorow we decided to continue the celebration and had a water balloon fight. It was really fun. We went to the movie theater and watched a movie. We then went to the park. We had BBQ. I will remember these two days as one of my best memories with my family.
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Nice blog even tho you had some errors , but I like your story of how you celebrated the 4th of July with your family
I like how you added the words we had to use correctly, it flows very good with your story. : ) : )
Thanks Mima! 💜
Hey Blanca,
Nice post about 4th of July. I never did this with my family, so you’re lucky! 😜 Those are some awesome memories with your family. Comment on my blog http://hmssarah.edublogs.org
~Sarah
Thank you.
Excellent story idea. It flows nicely.