“Look Blanca!” Hannah exclaimed.
I replied, “ Let’s go inside.”
Hannah and I went inside and found a comfy spot in the cave that was decorated. We saw a tiger blanket, a tiger pillow, a tiger lamp, and a tiger couch. We further explored the cave and found a nice-looking family of tigers.
“Hello!” the tiger greeted.
“You can talk?” Hannah asked.
“ Yes. Would you like to stay for some tea?” the tiger offered.
“No thank you,” I rejected the offer.
We were about to leave until the tiger was blocking our escape. That was when our lives had sadly ended.
Dear Blanca I like the description of the cave and your imagination you put in your story. : )
Dear Blanca,
I really like how you added another character in your story and the way you used a lot of dialogue. Also, I like the way you used many descriptive detail on how the cave looked.
Hi Blanca this is a story that I would read because it is a funny fictional story. If this story was longer I would love it.
I think you did an awesome job on your blog. I like how you wrote your blog in a different way.